Paragraph rewriter
Produce a clearer version of your paragraph that keeps the original meaning.
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See an example
Illustrative example, written for Jeeves.
- Original paragraph
- In light of the fact that the equipment delivery has not as yet taken place, it is our current expectation that the workshop may need to be moved, although this will be dependent upon whether the delivery is completed by Thursday.
- What should change?
- Write for workshop attendees. Clear, calm, no more than 60 words. Keep the uncertainty and Thursday condition.
Example result
Rewritten paragraph
The equipment has not arrived yet. We may need to move the workshop if it does not arrive by Thursday.
What changed
The revision puts the current situation first and the possible consequence second. “Has not arrived” replaces “delivery has not as yet taken place,” and the condition is easier to find.
What stayed
The workshop has not been confirmed as moved. Thursday remains the point that affects the decision, and the paragraph does not promise an update or name a replacement date.
One ambiguity to check
If “moved” means a change of venue rather than a change of date, replace it with “move to another venue” so attendees understand the possible change.
Get a better result
- Paste the paragraph and identify the intended reader.
- Choose the change in tone, clarity, or length.
- Check that important conditions and uncertainty remain intact.
Before you use the result
- Ambiguous source text may need your interpretation before a faithful rewrite is possible.
- A clearer sentence does not establish that its underlying claim is true.
Common questions
Can it keep my voice?
Yes. Describe the voice you want and identify phrases that should remain. You can also include a short sample of your preferred style.
Will it make my argument stronger?
It can make the expression clearer. It will not add evidence or make a claim more certain than your original text.